S sashpa25 Newcomer Joined Feb 27, 2010 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 8 May 19, 2010 #2 Pretty good!!! i rly like it.:laugh: _____________________ Proofreading SEO Copywriting
Varjot Active Member Joined Jul 3, 2007 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 128 May 22, 2010 #5 I'll throw some more up soon, gotta weed through them.
acashedbowl Guru Joined Mar 27, 2010 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 1,359 Location United States May 28, 2010 #7 I really like the one you just posted above. Something about it just attracts me to it.
Varjot Active Member Joined Jul 3, 2007 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 128 May 31, 2010 #8 Thank you! I'm glad theres some personal connotations linked to that poem :3
M I K E Guru Joined Jan 1, 2010 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 1,829 Location California May 31, 2010 #9 I like the first one better,you're good.
oneandonlysunny Active Member Joined Nov 17, 2009 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 100 Jun 2, 2010 #12 First class romance wired
trapt01 Member Joined Jul 24, 2010 Sythe Gold 0 Messages 68 Jul 29, 2010 #13 Decent. A little bit more of a ... rap game would be better