First C4d/Sig

First ever go with C4d. Cba atm to make it transparent/resize

 

Red, green, and black are not a pleasant color palate unless they're neon colors and they have a bright glow, like neon signs. Also ink/smoke stocks don't look good.

 

I think it's a good attempt for your first try. Try adding a transparent background, it would look a lot better imo.

 

True. I will fix the color scheme. I was running on redbull when i made it.
Also, the smoke is not a stock, they are brushes

 

i find the "smoke" text awesome for your first try bro you should improve on the smoke and make it transparent ill show u how, text me/skype anytime man

 

Thanks I somewhat followed a tut.

 

Good for a first attempt. I hypothesize that upon making the background transparent, the smoke brushing would need some soft erasing or adjustment to avoid the cut off effect from the signature boundaries. Also I agree with Nero in saying I'd prefer different colours as green and red and black aren't complimenting colours in this piece.

 

Thanks! I agree it needs more time I like the colours in this one better than the first:



Decided to keep background on this one, but i will remove it soon.

 

Is that not a template from youtube?

 

The only thing I downloaded was the lighting room.

 

updated new sig below

 

Links in your sig are broken man

 

I find that really hard to believe, because :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WM-YrnB_pMk

 

Download =/= following a tutorial.

 

Following a tutorial =/= Downloading the template in the description.

Nice try though.

 

Downloading a template?? I'm confused. The download is for the room, nothing more lol, its literally a room they made for the lighting. I didn't even use it in my current signature.

 

Couldn't bother watching a 12 minute video or thoroughly reading the description to proove a point.
Touché Ayy

 

There is no template lol