Adblock breaks this site

FIGHT! freestyle

Discussion in 'Music' started by OneEightSeven, Feb 24, 2009.

  1. OneEightSeven

    OneEightSeven Member

    Joined:
    Feb 12, 2009
    Posts:
    89
    Referrals:
    0
    Sythe Gold:
    0
    FIGHT! freestyle

    Call the boys cos im in trouble,
    in minutes the gang can see the numbers double,
    we ask them to fight but yea they buckle.
    dey pull out their glocks n aim for the dome
    gutta keep our heads up cos we aint at home
    we walk back slowly and run for cover
    they shoot the one we call our brother
    the war has begun and we havnt noticed
    pull out our guns and keep in focus !
     
  2. L0ok at ur 0

    L0ok at ur 0 Forum Addict
    Banned

    Joined:
    Dec 29, 2008
    Posts:
    409
    Referrals:
    0
    Sythe Gold:
    0
    FIGHT! freestyle

    Its not bad but you should use proper grammar and get lines between the phrases.
     
  3. Rawr Ricky

    Rawr Ricky Forum Addict
    Banned

    Joined:
    Feb 18, 2009
    Posts:
    516
    Referrals:
    0
    Sythe Gold:
    0
    FIGHT! freestyle

    Freestyle is the only thing I can deal with that has indecent grammar.
    But I tried out these lyrics just now and they're pretty good.
    You can find a beat very easily in this.

    If I had to rate this, I would say 9/10. Very good man.
     
< Another piece of work by me. | Screamo crunk >


 
 
Adblock breaks this site