Feedback required - Sythe logo

Looks really good to me! You're clearly talented.

 

Thanks.

 

I've started inking it;

 

Wanting some more responses guys
Expect a finished version by Saturday.

 

It looks awesome, I can't wait to see the completed version

 

It doesn't really matter how detailed it is.
The point that makes a logo is how recognizable it is and the readability of the letters.
The letter H, the castle, doesn't fit in fit the rest of the letters because it contains no curves

 

It has been inked

 

Imo the S should be taller than the rest

 

Same size looks better. Unless, you make the S significantly bigger.

 

Alright, changing the sizes won't be a problem

 

Pure text looks better than the colored one. Good luck & keep it up, I would love to see the final version of this ^_^

 

Alright, the environment can be removed anyway.
And thanks

 

You should shift the "the" part of sythe a little closer to the y, as it is now I think the 2nd half is a lil farther a part and would look better if it was pushed a lil closer. Not a biggie, just a small thing I noticed

 

I'll shift the text around once finished, thanks for noticing.

 

Looks amazing so far, wouldn't mind it as the new logo.

 

Thanks for the kind words Swaze.

 

flat colours added



yet to be shaded for texture and detail.

 

the spacing between the letters looks un-even.

 

That's not a problem fixing, i'll do it at the end don't worry
still 1 step left before finished.