Feedback; GFX - Layout Construction

Done; new one coming out!

 

Very nice! Good work, the main mistake which I can see here is it's too crowded,
The first thing I thought when I opened it was, wow.... that's a lot of things. If I was a potential customer, it might turn me away, perhaps try spacing it out a little more?

 

Totally agree. Its a plan so its going to be majorly edit; I will definitely take that under consideration. However, if you think about it people like Kinaesthetic have ALOT more text but I think its just crammed issued. Also needa make the boxes more fancy like Kinas

 

Things are VERY crowded, but the use of boxes to create modules is a very nice idea. Better than the rest of the thread layouts around here.
Try to keep everything cohesive.
By that I mean, use similar colours, reuse layer styles etc, this will make your layout look profession and well thought out.
The layer styles themselves look a little unpolished. Don't over do things, those gradient overlays are very strong, I suggest toning them down.
Also the random logos everywhere are sorta irrelevant, they don't have much purpose.
Good luck

 

Thank you for the feedback! Yeah definitely crowded. I edited that out already just for people to know. I am going use pen tool for a custom shape to fit everything vertically instead as it looks better to me in general. That should be enough feedback until I make new one Thanks guys.

 

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