experimental

[desu]

cnc

 

[Lukef555]

Its a little big but its very,very sexy. Not sure if you meant to but the dept is really really good too.

 

[Olive Juice]

Too light around the entire signature (unless you wanted it like that? Then ignore the rest of my post). Try adding a consistent source of light (or two, or three). This is sort of what I mean (I haven't done photoshop in a while, and I don't have the PSD, so I'm sure you could do much better):

Just experiment with lighting effects, maybe look at these if you're bored:
http://cloudbrush.com/?p=37

 

[Kiabin]

I love the concept. The only thing I don't like is the brightness. Tone it down a bit, and you should be set.

 

[wombakage]

Yeah, the brightness kinda kills the colours IMO
Stuff on the far right just detracts from the chick tbh

OTHERWISE JADOR!

 

[desu]

Too light around the entire signature (unless you wanted it like that? Then ignore the rest of my post). Try adding a consistent source of light (or two, or three). This is sort of what I mean (I haven't done photoshop in a while, and I don't have the PSD, so I'm sure you could do much better):

Just experiment with lighting effects, maybe look at these if you're bored:
http://cloudbrush.com/?p=37

lol alex.

ya ill make a v2 and change the lighting.

 

[Alteranz]

This'll sound like a broken record... but yea, brightness. Tone it down squidgey Depth is a bit off.... sharpening and blurring of the FG and BG could be improved- It's a but unrealistic in places, sections of the girl shouldn't be so sharp if she's as far back as she is (thinking about a realistic composition...)

To be quite honest, I really fuckin' love your work...

 

[desu]

This'll sound like a broken record... but yea, brightness. Tone it down squidgey Depth is a bit off.... sharpening and blurring of the FG and BG could be improved- It's a but unrealistic in places, sections of the girl shouldn't be so sharp if she's as far back as she is (thinking about a realistic composition...)

To be quite honest, I really fuckin' love your work...

I actually needed that. It's only just clicked that the depth and composition of the girl is really fucked.

Yeah ill post a v2 in a min.

 

[T R 1 B A L]

brightness is slightly too high, add contrast though.

Flow confusing.

Depth good.

Decent, not ur best doe <3

tell me when you get o