Erm, is this okay?

[Afferin]

Yeah, I'm new to graphics, and stuff.. Was messing around and made this:

:S Rate? I'm really new to graphics, so I don't care if you give me a 1 or anything. Just tell me what I should change.

 

[Xjaa]

well the animation is really slow and the bg looks really bad

so 3/10

 

[z4mor4k m1n1on]

yeah maybe speed up the animation , i dont really want to look at it trying to find out what it says for a minute... 4/10

 

[G0t 0wnd]

deffently speed up animation then id give it a 8/10

Also change it from silver toa darker color like black.