Eh, first attempt.

[Epiclygodly]

Rate, criticize and yada yada

Its pretty bad imo.

Any ways i could improve..?

 

[poopy2177]

I would take out the border for sure I would also try a couple sharpens and blurs to help depth a bit. I assume you are using photohop. Also the lighting is a bit weird since the lines in the bottom right and light on the nose and stuff. So... Ya just keep practicing

 

[ElitePka]

Good for your first attempt, but yeah I would take out the boarder.. Good Job

 

[Aquatic]

Although she is not hot in any way in my opinion, the effects are amazing.