Dot Cash's showcase

[Dot Cash]

Hey guys, just thought i would show you some of my work, i have been working for around 4 years now, some of this is old some of it is new, either way its just a few examples rather than everything i have produced

http://piclion.com/images/knottslayo.png
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[GFX | Justin]

Your pieces seem very empty, except for the purple one, which has chaotic flow and odd effects. The text also isn't that great :S

SarazGod is in the right direction, just add some more FX, depth, and work on your text

 

[Dot Cash]

okay, 1st like it clearly states at the top alot is old a few are new, only the link at the bottom and the bottom 2 are new, here ill post another new one...

 

[Emperor Nero]

Bro, don't take crit personal. Go back, study up, and blow us away next time. That is the first thing about GFX you need to learn. Oh, and that borders severely detract from a piece of work as well as bad text/bad text placement. Your effects technique needs more work, you can learn the basics through tuts which then you can morph into your own personal style. Now, go back, create something with our advice in mind, and blow us away.

 

[CheeseyChicken]

My personal favourite out of all them is "Mushy", i like the colours and stuff in that