Don't really like this

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[Kiabin]

It looks burned. The render isn't needed. Tone off a bit of the burning and it would make a few remakes.

 

[Deprah]

It looks burned. The render isn't needed. Tone off a bit of the burning and it would make a few remakes.

This + there's just way too much going on, and the border isn't needed.

 

[Skillers FTW]

I find that your render is a bit low res by my standards. It looks quite intense but there is too much going on.

 

[R 3 A L]

Yeah, Bit to much going on can't see anything really... should highlight a certain part you want to stand out