Dear Maddi - By Ryan

[Ryan]

Edited.

 

[Tgump]

BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW.

:3

I think it's cuuuuuuuuuuuute.

I liked the

Picture perfect moments, but still nothing beats the times
When I wake up in the morning with you sleepin' in my arms

:c

 

[Ryan]

BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW.

:3

I think it's cuuuuuuuuuuuute.

I liked the

:c

Why thank you Mr Gump. When I thought of that line, I was like :O Yes!

But srsly, I love waking up with her

 

[legit account trader]

hmm
hjmhm

 

[Ryan]

hmm
hjmhm

Thanks. Have a warning.

 

[MageBhoy07]

Really nice Ryan She should love it !

 

[Ryan]

Really nice Ryan She should love it !

Showed it to her yesterday She loved it =D

 

[Louis]

Place your hands on my heart, You can feel it beatin' faster
Put mine with yours, the precious life that I'm a part of

That part was obscenely heart-warming.

 

[MatthewGor123]

It's super sweet No homo but if I was your GF, I know I'd love it :O It's a great poem I smell a new Robert Frost in the making.

 

[Ryan]

That part was obscenely heart-warming.

Thank you =]

It's super sweet No homo but if I was your GF, I know I'd love it :O It's a great poem I smell a new Robert Frost in the making.

Well, I'm writing one for TDD & his GF, then writing another with Macroman

 

[Macroman]

Ryan, Like I told you before, Get your ass to a studio >_>.

 

[i noob killer i]

yeh well done dude

 

[Benwise]

Ryan, Like I told you before, Get your ass to a studio >_>.

Agreed. Awesome song

 

[Ryan]

Thanks for the feedback guys ^.^

 

[Bbri06]

Picture perfect moments, but still nothing beats the times
When I wake up in the morning with you sleepin' in my arms

I completely agree with Tgump that those lines are the best.

Well, I'm writing one for TDD & his GF

Can't even write your own poem Tdd

<3

 

[d 7 x]

I really like it, but the nickname part about bugz, even though it rhymes well, doesn't seem to fit with the poem. However you already gave it to her... so

Goodjob, I'm glad she liked it.

 

[Ryan]

I completely agree with Tgump that those lines are the best.



Can't even write your own poem Tdd

<3

Thanks I have to agree, when I wrote that I was like :O Yes!

I really like it, but the nickname part about bugz, even though it rhymes well, doesn't seem to fit with the poem. However you already gave it to her... so

Goodjob, I'm glad she liked it.

Thank you =)

I agree with you also, it doesn't fit with what the verse is about, but I don't hate it in there. If I could re-write it I would.