Dear Maddi - By Ryan

Edited.

 

BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW.

:3

I think it's cuuuuuuuuuuuute.

I liked the

:c

 

Why thank you Mr Gump. When I thought of that line, I was like :O Yes!

But srsly, I love waking up with her

 

hmm
hjmhm

 

Thanks. Have a warning.

 

Really nice Ryan She should love it !

 

Showed it to her yesterday She loved it =D

 

That part was obscenely heart-warming.

 

It's super sweet No homo but if I was your GF, I know I'd love it :O It's a great poem I smell a new Robert Frost in the making.

 

Thank you =]

Well, I'm writing one for TDD & his GF, then writing another with Macroman

 

Ryan, Like I told you before, Get your ass to a studio >_>.

 

yeh well done dude

 

Agreed. Awesome song

 

Thanks for the feedback guys ^.^

 

I completely agree with Tgump that those lines are the best.

Can't even write your own poem Tdd

<3

 

I really like it, but the nickname part about bugz, even though it rhymes well, doesn't seem to fit with the poem. However you already gave it to her... so

Goodjob, I'm glad she liked it.

 

Thanks I have to agree, when I wrote that I was like :O Yes!

Thank you =)

I agree with you also, it doesn't fit with what the verse is about, but I don't hate it in there. If I could re-write it I would.