Creed - please suggestions

I don't know if I did blend right, if I did not please lead me to a place that teaches me how to blend lol. Text was placed where it was because of the various colors. Suggestions and comments?



version 2

 

alright sig, text is like VERY VERY bad. 7/10

 

Give suggestions not just tell whats wrong if you don't mind.

 

Alright ill be more spacific, theirs a purple circle in the top right thats needs fixed to a dark blue or something. The render has something at the bottom right side, mabye part of a leg or something? i think it would look better erasing it. Also pick a simpler text, and make it blend in, like put it on the bottom left, and make the text a white, and make a dark blue outer glow on it or something.

EDIT: is the purple circle a watermark?!?!??

 

Ok will fix and post the version 2. The thing bottom left is part of the suit. Also the purple is a lens flare hidden behind a lot of things.

 

the flow is completely off, the effects are completely random, not fitting in with the scheme of it all. The text is hideous.

 

As the above people have just showed what you have done wrong and not said what u should do, i will do the same. If we told you what to do then it wouldn't be your creation now would it? I do agree with a little help with small things like what kinda of font and textures but you need to be creative and have the skill and style to create YOUR OWN and a good sig.

Well first of all, you have completely over-done the sharpen on the render. The background doesn't suit the theme, style and texture of the render. The random area of red at the top right corner isn't helping. The blue lines and glows need better effect to them (as i said, make your own design, im not choosing).

The only thing I can really see that is god is render placement and that alone is a 8/10 (just the render).

What happened to your old sig style, they were good, try to branch out from them....

 

the text is bad becasue it's centered and doesnt matchthe style of the sig.

 

Sigs often look a lot better not as complicated, in my opinion the colours clash too much on this sig.

Yeah, true the text is extreamly bad :s, the 2nd version is a lot better, but still not up to scratch, but i'm not good at text either :

It looks overshrapened, the flow is completly wrong, and the lighting isn't so good.

A good solid beginner sig, if you think i could help you with anything just add me on MSN.

 

New msn? Ok its a new style for you guys as far as the sharpened, I saw this style on another site with alot of graphic sig artists, I don't have any lighting, I don't know what to do about flow. I add your new msn but I can't work on a version 3 today, too busy playing 360 xD.

 

wow dude, just because u see a style and try and redo it doesnt justify it. It doesnt matter if van gough does it.


If u see the best gfx artist make something, then u try and replace it, it's not gonna be as good. So dont use that as an excuse, people are telling you what's wrong, instead of getting insulted make another sig using what they said.

 

I didn't mean it like that, I just said it was a new style that I saw else where -.- and I am planning to.

 

umm its to sharp try bluring the hole sig then erase ova the render and leave his back arm blured a bit..text is bad have it liek a simple text if u wanna use blending options on it onli use drop shadow all others ruin it...look at my text and try something like dat.

 

if you look at my sig I used the same render, I just toned down the colors