Crap imo.

[w000t]

v2 added border and some more effects

V3 light source is a little to big will fix in v4

v4

:\ idk rate?

 

[goodman3209]

I like but cant really see the name that well should fix that would give it a 6/10

 

[Lukef555]

The depth is nice, unfortunately the text can barely be seen and theres not much effects, can i ask where you found that stock? I think i might give my hand at it.

 

[w000t]

Lookbook.nu is were i found the stock and im bout to upload a v2.

 

[Lukef555]

I havent found anything on lookbook in awhile, hmm.

V2: You just added a c4d it looks like. :/

 

[w000t]

Yeah i added a bubble c4d and a effect c4d & added the border moved the text a lil

 

[Lukef555]

The text is better but take the effect c4d and that line out, and get some lighting going. Also try putting some effects behind the girl.

 

[w000t]

Okay thanks for the feed back I will be working on this untill i have to leave in about 30 minutes.

 

[w000t]

updated for the last time tonight night all

 

[tidusjar]

You completely put the light source in the wrong place... Dude just take a quick look at the picture and where does your eyes lead? In the bottom right corner... Thats bad. I suggest looking up some tutorials on light. But overall not bad i suppose and i agree with the other comments 6/10

 

[Angelmax]

Like tidusjar said, the light really draws the eye away from what I assume is meant to be the focal point.

 

[Spraynwipe]

Needs more depth honestly, give it some more substance.

 

[w000t]

Uploaded a v4!

 

[MohtasaUnique]

Take V4, replace the C4D from V2, and redo the text and I'd give it a 7