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The first one's person seems a bit cut off like a statue. (I know it's dress is just the same color as the rest of the render, but it is hard to notice. It also looks a bit chaotic with no clear flow.

On the other hand, the second one does look quite nice. It has good flow, and the color scheme is interesting.
 
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I really like the second one, but the first one has some issues. First the focal being colorized jut throws the piece off and I am not a fan of the mixture of the lighting stock and the smoke/ink stock in the background. I kind of get the floating head thing from it as I think she is blended too well with the background, textures, and effects. I can also see where imagine is getting the no clear flow but I have to disagree; there is flow but it needs some work. I also find it lacking lighting and depth.
 
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I really like the second one, but the first one has some issues. First the focal being colorized jut throws the piece off and I am not a fan of the mixture of the lighting stock and the smoke/ink stock in the background. I kind of get the floating head thing from it as I think she is blended too well with the background, textures, and effects. I can also see where imagine is getting the no clear flow but I have to disagree; there is flow but it needs some work. I also find it lacking lighting and depth.

Hence the no "clear flow" :P

There is a certain flow if you really look for it, but it is obstructed by a billion lines.
 
I do like the first, although pointing out some of the issues that others already said, the flow is a little chaotic. I do actually like the colours, just not the blue on her face. It has some interesting depth that I'm quite a fan of, and the composition has been done well.

Second one is lovely. The mix of different colours and tones works really well, and I like how it has a sort of glow to it. Very cool stuff!
 
Gonna have to agree, first one seems a bit too chaotic.
Second one is really nice there isn't anything I could say to improve that style.
 
can't see it but remember you from back in 08'.. my sythe was phatboy008 if you remember
 
Nah I was never banned :S , stopped going on to find out the system got wiped or someshit.. who would I talk to to get my acc back


EDIT; my user was Fattboy008 not "Phat"
 
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