Yours looks sloppy. Cut off text, slight blur and has a disproportionate godsword which is also cut off.
If you're using photoshop, download these http://www.deviantart.com/art/55-Shields-Custom-Shapes-216310641
Use that as the background, get a better clean cut font and a properly rendered godsword.
I had no clue that was a godsword until I saw the original lol

