Copying sparc mac

thoughts?

 

What are you trying to copy?

 

Yours looks sloppy. Cut off text, slight blur and has a disproportionate godsword which is also cut off.

If you're using photoshop, download these http://www.deviantart.com/art/55-Shields-Custom-Shapes-216310641

Use that as the background, get a better clean cut font and a properly rendered godsword.

 

^ Otherwise just pen tool all of it and add the text. Either way your imitation is lacking at this stage bud.

 

I had no clue that was a godsword until I saw the original lol

 

Lol ya same here

 

lol so blury not even a gfods sword eheheh

 

Text cut-off (surely unintentional), blurry, not clean-cut, and notice how sparc marc's does not have any shadows

 

Idk man that looks like it came out a bit sloppy