Collab mek

[Evilbobman]

ignore colors, cause at this point I've given up trying to get em to work :'(

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[two headed boy]

basic composition issues, the yellow line is the focal.

text is also distracting

no real lighting

effect c4d looks tacky and ruins any depth

oversharpened background

 

[blittzye]

I like it, would look better if the text was faded into the background.

 

[Serac]

I think you aligned the text too close together. You should border them and drop shadow to make it much more appealing.