[Cnc] Spitting City

[scubba]

Haven't done a design in like 2 months, so just did a quick khalifa tag to see if I got any worse.
CnC appreciated.
Try 1

Try 2

 

[CrumpledHope]

Text is overpowering, and lighting isn't really evident.

However, I like this piece, everything fits, aside from the text.