What I could improve?
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What I could improve?
What program(s) are you using? It will let us know your limitations.
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bigk1121
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give some variety of value to the gray stroke. other than that for this style it looks good.
idk whats going on with the font, I assume you made it yourself with the paintbrush. Although the kerning is not too bad. But there is a little nick inbetween the C and the H.
I like the green and purple lines going outward, they remind me of the northern lights - did you make a line then blur them with the blur tool?
Im not really liking the grey strokes going through, perhaps using 'simulate pressure' with the pen tool would produce a better result?
And maybe its just me but I dont like the orange glow in the center. I think a different color or different placing might be better.
For creating arrays try moving a layers center point [the crosshair in the center of your selection when you ctrl+t] then moving the selection. Once you move it; repeatedly hit ctrl+shift+alt+T to repaste your selection with the same distance you moved it the first time..
hope that made sense lol
I like the green and purple lines going outward, they remind me of the northern lights - did you make a line then blur them with the blur tool?
Im not really liking the grey strokes going through, perhaps using 'simulate pressure' with the pen tool would produce a better result?
And maybe its just me but I dont like the orange glow in the center. I think a different color or different placing might be better.
For creating arrays try moving a layers center point [the crosshair in the center of your selection when you ctrl+t] then moving the selection. Once you move it; repeatedly hit ctrl+shift+alt+T to repaste your selection with the same distance you moved it the first time..
hope that made sense lol
the text wasn't created by me, and I see mmm , I was thinking of removing the line but lost the PSD again .... I need a graphic designer to teach me more, I see everyones points
bigk1121
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Bad choice of font.
Smudging on the far right if pretty bad as well. Too noticeable, not in a good way.
I see the direction you were going in (Abstract), but this is sloppy.
You seem pretty amateur (not a bad thing), I suggest looking up some tutorials on youtube and deviantart, they can help a lot.
Smudging on the far right if pretty bad as well. Too noticeable, not in a good way.
I see the direction you were going in (Abstract), but this is sloppy.
You seem pretty amateur (not a bad thing), I suggest looking up some tutorials on youtube and deviantart, they can help a lot.
My dad has put many locks on youtube, and finds out ever time I uses a proxy, the videos also now don't load right when I bypass with https or uses a proxy, I can only watch on the ipad... My brother fault, he used 200gb in a day....
