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Good start, but basically you need two main things:
Specular - http://www.sythe.org/showthread.php?t=1316103
Ambient Occlusion - Ctrl + B > Effect > Ambient Occlusion. Makes everything look 20 times better.
In addition to that I'd really try to tone down that gradient and really try to stick to a solid color scheme for the time being.
Adding on to what noam said, I think you could also change the colours and make it all one colour instead of various shades of pink/purple. It's a great start and very nice for a first![]()
I do like it. maybe you can do a graphics for me?i would really appreciate it

