CnC and tips on first c4D work ever please

Ijuuuust got c4d and this is what i came up with
please no "bad" or "sucks" but give me feedback i can work with

 

They arent that bad. Just try to practice with something other than blurred strokes now

 

thanks will do.

I have soo much questions bout c4d lol

 

The materials on them look a little bland. The two in the center column are in my opinion the best, but the top is way too sharp and looks too low quality.

 

I think they look decent for a first try. One thing you need to do is not use the blurred strokes though or make better use of them, it kind of looks out of place/messy atm

 

ye i figured, kinda playing around with C4D atm.