Caved 3D :(

[poopy2177]

my first 3D text sig tags are cooler still but I wanted to try

i figured out i have no clue how c4d works.


Btw: How do I like reset c4d because I did something weird and now it's all screwed up?

 

You are right, tags are way cooler than sigs.

As far as CnC goes, it's not bad for a first. The lighting and renders are too oversharpened and bright and it detracts from the text, making it hard to read at first.

Post a picture of what's wrong in C4d and I'll see if I can help.

 

To be honest, I actually quiet like this. If this is really your first, then I must say you did a great job o.0! Much better than what I'd end up making

I would suggest to make the color of the text pop out more, in the middle theres a bit too much brightness on the text making it white

 

[ZippyGFX]

Always appreciate people posting tags on sythe, but I can sure give you some CnC for your first text signature.

The text itself is hard to make out due to all the loaded effects. When adding in nebulas try switching it to channel instead of layers (this http://gyazo.com/22d1b83dcb6c870e1141a6eed4643135) and holding ctrl on the RGB layer then dragging the selected part onto the text. After that go over the part you don't need with a larger soft brush eraser because the erasing you've done atm looks sloppy. Also try to find some transparent lightning bolts so you don't have to erase the edges, I have some if you want.

If you have any questions, add my skype mate I can help you out.

 

[poopy2177]

Ty for the cnc I appreciate it! made a new one that's a little better

 

Always appreciate people posting tags on sythe, but I can sure give you some CnC for your first text signature.

The text itself is hard to make out due to all the loaded effects. When adding in nebulas try switching it to channel instead of layers (this http://gyazo.com/22d1b83dcb6c870e1141a6eed4643135) and holding ctrl on the RGB layer then dragging the selected part onto the text. After that go over the part you don't need with a larger soft brush eraser because the erasing you've done atm looks sloppy. Also try to find some transparent lightning bolts so you don't have to erase the edges, I have some if you want.

If you have any questions, add my skype mate I can help you out.

Would you I able to get the lightning bolts also?

Ty for the cnc I appreciate it! made a new one that's a little better

Do share!

 

[ZippyGFX]

I'll pm you them Jack, and poopy let's see that 2nd attempt

 

[00Se7en]

Very nice first attempt! But may i suggest lowering the overall brightness, and moving/shrinking the glare for it's awkward to the eye. The left is very bright while the right side is very well blended.

 

[Simaas]

It's a overcontrasted at parts, and kind of low quality. You should work on that.

 

[Lvl 75 Def]

bit oversharpened and alot of overlayed stuff, good for your first tho

 

[patriotsa1]

On the "O" on Pokemon you should change the brightness of the flare.

 

It's wayyy to busy mate. The text is really hard to make out do to the numerous amount of effects. Try taking some of them out and making it legible. Other than that, I like the actual text in the background, it looks purdy

 

[The D O P E]

I like it though i do agree its kinda too bright.

 

[Fuonki]

effects are really nice but i think you used abit too many effects. Its hard to read the text but other than that, nice work