Without trying to sound harsh, this sort of simplistic design would yield better results if you'd taken the silhouette approach with it. The embossed emblem with a 100% opacity gradient on it is an eye sore and unprofessional, as this appears to be for business I'd reconsider the design and try someone who's a little better in the branding aspect of design.
Like I said, not trying to sound harsh.. Just giving you some honest feedback and hopefully constructive.