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Discussion in 'Graphics Gallery' started by theArc, Apr 21, 2013.

  1. theArc

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    Thoughts on my first C4D piece?
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    Wow, that's amazing for a first timer! I'd try adding the lighting on the right to the left too - it doesn't quite look right ATM :) Well done!
     
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    yes do that an make the E a bit smaller to match the rest of the text. an then it should look perfect!
     
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    I like the E bigger. Here it is with another light
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    yeah that looks better maybe make the Z the same size as the e to balance out the design.
     
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    Nice job for first try man :) I suggest lowering the size of the caps on the text layer. They're pretty big :eek:
     
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