First C4D Text

Thoughts on my first C4D piece?

 

Wow, that's amazing for a first timer! I'd try adding the lighting on the right to the left too - it doesn't quite look right ATM Well done!

 

yes do that an make the E a bit smaller to match the rest of the text. an then it should look perfect!

 

I like the E bigger. Here it is with another light

 

yeah that looks better maybe make the Z the same size as the e to balance out the design.

 

Nice job for first try man I suggest lowering the size of the caps on the text layer. They're pretty big