C4D to PS

[sportsplayer12]

This is my 2nd attempt to make something in Cinema 4D. Started it in C4D, brought it to PS. And yes, I have a transparent version.

 

[daveyakapeaceout]

That looks really really good. I have two suggestions though.

-Fix the fade on the reflection. Make it look as if the letters we being reflected onto glass. (less fade)
-Keep up the good work!

That is all,
Davey

 

[sportsplayer12]

I probably won't fix the fade as I think it fits as it is, but I might go back in and add some texture to the letters as well the fade. Was going to do it the first time but decided it looked decent without.

~Thanks for the compliment.

 

It looks pretty good, but maybe slightly over done with the explosion FX. Less is more, its hard to do it correctly.

 

[stui]

thats actually really good, and im agreeing with jack, for explosion FX less is more. Its better then most peoples second go though so good job

 

[PiPz]

make me header and i pay you 50$!
and if you do me a signature 3D or something!
if you make me signa name i need RixWhood i pay for that 15$
and header text and size u can see in my posts!

 

[PiPz]

and i need my computer bg for do me in c4d me bg text Crissu and you add all beautiful stuffs i pay 30$

 

[Imagine]

My personal problem with it is the y. Although the reflection makes it look like there's a surface there, the Y just seems to cut through it. I suggest either making it legitimately look like it cut through it (make cracks, etc), or fixing it in some other way.

 

[Liight]

Looks really nice all around. The only thing that really bothered me is the reflection. It kind of looks like its solid then just cuts off.

I know its not a big deal at all, just think it would look better if it faded out.

I think that's just because I have OCD or something lol >_>

9/10