C&C my DBZ Tech sig. [FAIL]

[Solid tank]

Here's the fruit of my hard, painful labor;

v1

v2 Less c4d whored, but looks pretty empty on the sides..

C&C ONLY NO spam like "5/10" or "nice gj" I DO NOT want rating, I'm after C&C.

We'll anyways, go easy, i know its not very good, not even close to the meaning of good. It's only SOME-WHAT tech related, i couldnt find a good BG so i used a C4D, I feel like poking my eyes out everytime i look at it tbh. Dont mind where it says anti-rip, oh and i need help on the right font.

any advice would be helpful, please and Thank you.

REMEMBER: C&C AND C&C ONLY.

 

[T7 Press 7T]

I personaly dont like it not that is sucks but its not that great, Great effects could improve on the C4D doesnt really match

 

[Solid tank]

That made NO sense to me what so ever, please only post if you know what the hell you're talking about.

 

[.::MaSteR::.]

very nice i think the 3 star dragon ball could've been done better like the border of the sig/orb.

p.s. meow

 

[Phil]

There is only a few people on Sythe capable of giving good C&C. Well anyway.

The kinda orb things around the edges are quite easy to do, although they don't look good in such a dull and boring mustard colour IMO.

The center orb is better with the things around the edges, that's a hard skill to do.

The background is bad because you've just put some C4D's and beveled lighting brushes.

In my opinion the center would look good with a coloured picture, slightly tiltied so it actually looks it's part of the orb.

Next time for a tech sig i would suggest you use a semetrical style, such as TDD's first ones.

The banner on the top i don't really like, because it doesn't fit the rest of the sig, and doesn't blend at all.

Overall a good first attempt, just work on those pointers, and if you need anymore help just ask on MSN.

 

[Phil]

There is only a few people on Sythe capable of giving good C&C. Well anyway.

The kinda orb things around the edges are quite easy to do, although they don't look good in such a dull and boring mustard colour IMO.

The center orb is better with the things around the edges, that's a hard skill to do.

The background is bad because you've just put some C4D's and beveled lighting brushes.

In my opinion the center would look good with a coloured picture, slightly tiltied so it actually looks it's part of the orb.

Next time for a tech sig i would suggest you use a semetrical style, such as TDD's first ones.

The banner on the top i don't really like, because it doesn't fit the rest of the sig, and doesn't blend at all.

Overall a good first attempt, just work on those pointers, and if you need anymore help just ask on MSN.

 

[soccertj]

I think You should have either found a diff
render or blended it more also
you should have connected the 4 star like the
rest if gohan was pushed down a little on the sig
and connected to the 4 star i think it would look better

 

[soccertj]

I think You should have either found a diff
render or blended it more also
you should have connected the 4 star like the
rest if gohan was pushed down a little on the sig
and connected to the 4 star i think it would look better

 

[TDD]

No flow whatsoever, nothing fits together, etc.

definately not a good thign to use in a sig, and it's far too flat.

 

[OldFinn]

It's horrible, to be honest.

 

[Solid tank]

It's horrible, to be honest.

/agree'd

 

[p00zder]

Lol nice one