Ok, well, here's what's wrong with that one. It has fair color, but in the wrong places. What you should have done with the clouds is made them highlighted by the moon by giving them the blue hue, instead of the open sky. Simple fix for this is to go to the brown color you are using in the sky, and darken it to about 90% darker than what it is. You also might want to consider the sort of real shadows that the moon would put off, with those trees there. Your text wouldn't be one solid color with that taken into account. Also, just for kicks, I would move the sprite over to the right, where the ghost motion of himself is, and put the ghosting where he is right now. Just flip-flopping him around.kk, i'll do that laterwanna C+C my iori sig too, considering you're being helpful
(no sarcasm)

