Boy in Ohio grows a 'Caffeine Baby'!

[-Arial-]

Just an article I wrote in regards to a boy in Ohio.

Found some information on it on the web, thought I'd write a piece about it.

Let me know what you think.

http://newsflavor.com/world/usa-canada/boy-in-ohio-grows-a-caffeine-baby/

NEW ARTICLE ADDED:

http://authspot.com/short-stories/a...abbit-with-seven-rows-of-teeth-attacks-child/

Thanks a lot guys.

Check out the link, its safe.

Arial.​

 

[MohtasaUnique]

It's a nice article, but you shouldn't start out with "as you know" because that right there deters a third of your readers who instantly think "no, I didn't know that" and they'll feel like they're missing out on something. That makes them not want to read on, etc

Keep writing yo

 

[DMR]

Well written article, almost like a professional wrote it!

Keep writing, how old are you? Your writing is really good.

 

[tofuhamster]

Is all the stuff on this website real?
Some of them seem fake or a joke...like the Onion.

Can you link us to the source of this information? I'm pretty interested if it's real.

 

[-Arial-]

Thanks for the feedback.

I'm 17 to answer your previous question.

Thanks for the advice, just did a little writing because I'm bored.

 

[kill dank]

Is this made up or are there sources? I can't find any really.

 

[Optimum]

This is a pretty well-written article. It seems a little colloquial at times though in places, for example "it feeds on nutrients in the blood, it literally cannot live without its carrier", but on a whole it seemed like something strange enough to be in a newspaper and be shared with family/friends.

 

[-Arial-]

Thanks, yeah its the first article I wrote.

Just got told about the site and decided to try it out .

 

[Quadro]

Dude is this real???

 

[-Arial-]

Figure it out for yourself.

 

[Joker91]

No, it's not real.

 

[undercover]

Hahah started to scare me at first. Nice tho

 

[slysteeler]

Late Aprils fools? Lol.

 

[-Arial-]

Nope, just an article I wrote out of boredom.

Flashy title + Fake believable story = Good Readership.

 

[-Arial-]

Keep the feedback coming please.

 

[Rebecca Black]

Well done, you actually had me going there and I was kind of scared because I probably drink more then 10 caffeinated drinks a day. x)

You should write short stories. I'd read them.

 

[-Arial-]

Thanks for the motivation tbh.

I might start writing short stories, see how it goes.

 

[-Arial-]

Keep the feedback coming through please, new article added.

Let me know what you think.