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I saw the idea somewhere and it inspired me to make one.

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Criticize this, please. Posts like ''nice'', or ''10/10'' are unwanted.
 
It doesn't look good; you really need to work on your blending as well as overall composition. It looks as if you just stuck a few pictures on top of one another.
 
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umm, being serious here: whats with all those white particle stuff on the eyelids?

Yeah it really looks overdone or out of place. The eye itself looks decent though.
 
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sorry this is kind of bad :/ no offence. but. the red eye is soo easy. and then the eyelids.. horrible :O. sorry.
 
sorry this is kind of bad :/ no offence. but. the red eye is soo easy. and then the eyelids.. horrible :O. sorry.

You're not giving me constructive criticism anywhere; so how about you get out of my thread and come back whenever you can properly criticize my work?
 
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You're not giving me constructive criticism anywhere; so how about you get out of my thread and come back whenever you can properly criticize my work?

soo. whats to construct on this? leave away the eyelid mess? k?
 
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It seems really quick and effortless to be quite honest.

A hue change on the eye and some weird brushes around the lashes. Try and look at the piece as a whole and make it work together. The stuff around the eye obviously take precedence over everything else, so when somebody sees it, they just stare at that.

Threw something together really quick to try and show you what I mean by making it cohesive:

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Hmmmm. Not to be repetitive but like everyone else has said it looks like there was no effort put into it. Imo the bluriness on top wasnt really necessary. ^^ Look at what Jiwi has and try to learn a few things. 'nd to avoid getting hate as you may see it you might want to practice more before you make other threads just to avoid further conflict. :-)
 
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Hmmmm. Not to be repetitive but like everyone else has said it looks like there was no effort put into it. Imo the bluriness on top wasnt really necessary. ^^ Look at what Jiwi has and try to learn a few things. 'nd to avoid getting hate as you may see it you might want to practice more before you make other threads just to avoid further conflict. :-)

i did not mean to hate in any way. just saying. Whatever tho. Gl on ur next try
 
It seems really quick and effortless to be quite honest.

A hue change on the eye and some weird brushes around the lashes. Try and look at the piece as a whole and make it work together. The stuff around the eye obviously take precedence over everything else, so when somebody sees it, they just stare at that.

Threw something together really quick to try and show you what I mean by making it cohesive:

izbGGooW2iFf4.png

Thanks for the feedback!

Hmmmm. Not to be repetitive but like everyone else has said it looks like there was no effort put into it. Imo the bluriness on top wasnt really necessary. ^^ Look at what Jiwi has and try to learn a few things. 'nd to avoid getting hate as you may see it you might want to practice more before you make other threads just to avoid further conflict. :-)

I didn't blur the top part, it was already blurry in the original stock; thank you for the feedback anyway!
 
thats horrible i would not post that on my sig!! maybe if you blurred and added some background effects it would be nicer
 
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I saw the idea somewhere and it inspired me to make one.

Criticize this, please. Posts like ''nice'', or ''10/10'' are unwanted.
It looks a bit overdone but a good first attempt overall. I would work on your blending of the edges because like others have said... it does look like you took 1 image and put it over the eye. While I agree with some points people have said its completely rude to say "horrible and effortless!!!" it was a solid effort but I would definitely work on the blending and hue choice.
It seems really quick and effortless to be quite honest.

A hue change on the eye and some weird brushes around the lashes. Try and look at the piece as a whole and make it work together. The stuff around the eye obviously take precedence over everything else, so when somebody sees it, they just stare at that.

Threw something together really quick to try and show you what I mean by making it cohesive:
I like the simplicity of it but if someone wasn't looking for it they would not see that you legitimately changed the eye. It was a better example of what to do though... compared to complete shutdown of ability others have so rudely have done.
thats horrible i would not post that on my sig!! maybe if you blurred and added some background effects it would be nicer

You have posted in about 8 different graphics threads in about 10 minutes with absolutely no point to any of your posts beyond "Terrible gtfo!" or "Oh i really like it!!!" please stop spamming this forum and take more then 3 seconds to make a post.
 
I think of something to say that hasn't already been said. However, I do not think that this was that bad of an attempt. Less of the bubbly stuff around the eye. I think its off-putting.
 
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