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Black Rock Shooter

Tye

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Hey~
Something I made a day or two ago :3
Would appreciate some honest CnC on it.

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Pretty nice ;)

I think the blue adds a nice touch to the image and it may be worth trying a little more in places.
 
it has great lighting if you made it though the blue thing kinda ruins it, yet it's also a bit bland so maybe add some effects.
 
I rather like it.
I'm not a fan of the colour scheme though, it feels as though it's dominated by that bleached gold.
I think there's also too much skin, if you perhaps covered up the girl's lower torso it would look nicer.
Also, the overall image is far over contrasted. The light from above is very stark, and the shadows are also quite profound.
Balancing the scales between the two would enhance the image.
The blue is a nice touch, and as previously mentioned could be explored elsewhere.
I'm interested to see more of your work. Well done.
 
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