Battle sig C&C

[Draucia]

Me and |D| are about to have a gfx battle, and heres the one I made so far:

I know it's not my best, but I also didn't have much time (and it has to be done by tomorrow).

Could I get some C&C on this?

Oh and gl |D|.

 

[Jman17]

To be honest, I don't see anything wrong with this. It is really well put together, the colors are well blended, it has decent flow.

Maybe the render could be blended in just a tad more, but overall it is good.

 

[Draucia]

To be honest, I don't see anything wrong with this. It is really well put together, the colors are well blended, it has decent flow.

Maybe the render could be blended in just a tad more, but overall it is good.

Thanks for the feedback .

 

I think it needs a stronger focal point. Right now the flow is going to the center, yet it doesn't seem that the center is the focal point. Maybe a bit more blending on the edges and tweak the lighting a little. But otherwise fantastic.

 

[cod4addict12]

Wow D is going to have some competition i'd say add more color to the top dont leave it so blank and maybe sharpen it but other than that looks amazing.

 

Nonono I'd say leave the top blank. It adds nice contrast.

 

[Draucia]

Wow D is going to have some competition i'd say add more color to the top dont leave it so blank and maybe sharpen it but other than that looks amazing.

Yeah his is really good too. Well I don't want to fill it too much because I won't to leave the flower showing really good, but I'll see it. I sharpened it.

 

[|D|]

Your better then me now, im ready when you are.

for cNc
The lighting is a bit to weak
Nice use of clipping masks
its really good overall

edit: GOOD LUCK

 

[dam prayer noobs]

i like this a lot. the only thing i would change is delete/move the leaf by her left ear, it took me a while to figure out what it was cuz half of it was white.