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should i continue working on the ribs or just leave the image without them?

should i also work on the top head skull drips/lines? i dont feel like they don't flow well atm.

opinions and suggestions are appreciated anytime about anything

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[tonzo100]

Continue working on the ribs man, they look insane

 

[ZippyGFX]

I think if you're going to do the skeleton ribs then make them more proportionate to how his body is turned as well as the size of them I think they need to be a bit larger. As for the flow of the drip lines, I don't think they're needed on the top of his teeth but you can keep it flowing out the middle and bottom and have them flowing more downward like you've done on the left side. The sharpness of the engraved text also draws away from the piece quite a bit.

 

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Continue working on the ribs man, they look insane

will do

I think if you're going to do the skeleton ribs then make them more proportionate to how his body is turned as well as the size of them I think they need to be a bit larger. As for the flow of the drip lines, I don't think they're needed on the top of his teeth but you can keep it flowing out the middle and bottom and have them flowing more downward like you've done on the left side. The sharpness of the engraved text also draws away from the piece quite a bit.

yeah ive been trying to make them proportional and sized to the body (hella hard for me idk why), for the skull, something similar like this?
(ik some parts look like poop af but im open to suggestions on the flow)

and the background (words n shit) has been removed onto a new bg!