any good?

[p296]

about some girl
well its slow and fingerpicked

You are my sunrise and my sunset,
You are the ray of light piercing through the clouds,
You are all I see when I fall asleep now,
You are the angel of my dreams

The first day I met you I was captivated,
from your very look, to your very sound,
when you first kissed me, I was sent to heaven,
I knew my life had just begun

You are my sunrise and my sunset,
You are the ray of light piercing through the clouds,
You are all I see when I fall asleep now,
You are the angel of my dreams

Do you remember, that night together,
hudled close, I could feel your every breath,
And when you told me, just how much you loved me,
I just wished that night would never end

You are my sunrise and my sunset,
You are the ray of light piercing through the clouds,
You are all I see when I fall asleep now,
You are the angel of my dreams

And I need you here by me,
and I need you to see, just how much you mean to me,
Now before you go, just give me one chance,
so I can be the man you need me to be

Because, you are my sunrise and my sunset,
You are the ray of light piercing through the clouds,
You are all I see when I fall asleep now,
You are the angel of my dreams

Yea, you are all I see when I fall asleep now,
You are the angel of my dreams...

so what do you think?

 

[Jaymz]

Its quite good

 

[p296]

wow funny story I bring all my lyrics to school because thats where I get the majority of them done and I open up my songs folder and nothing so I get to
next period and they are all there and the girl I wrote this for was walking out of the class and the only song missing was this one... Haha idk if I'm mad at her or not

 

[Awesome-0o]

Its good, not my type of music but still good.

 

Its pretty good
so when are you going to sing it to her

 

[p296]

yea im not going to

 

[BARR3D]

Nice =]

 

[Dark Koed]

It isn't bad, not the subject of poetry im interested in the most, but it still isn't too bad