I don't think the text is too bright at all, it's eye catching yet not hurting the eyes.
The effects on the other hand seem over-killed in this one, way too much going on with all the light work.
The color scheme stays constant so that's a plus, but you've got a lot of fractles that aren't needed try cutting down on those and experiment with different ways on how to use them.
Keep them coming mate, they're looking better.