Another Poopy rap by me!

[took.too.long]

Poop on my balls
Shit on my dick
Lick on my cock
Make it hard as rock
Please dont be
Callin me hunny
Just beat my dick
like it owes you money!
I hate all you Hoes
throwin out blows
Tryina hurt the boss
it'll just result in a loss! Bitch!

 

[lacuna]

LMFAO!!!
I was laughin the whole time i read this lmao

 

[Bordmb]

Poop on my balls
Shit on my dick
Lick on my cock

I quit after that line. Is that the kind of stuff you are into? Girls or guys doing that on your dick then licking it off?

Keep them coming, hopefully they will get better. I will read all you submit next time, hopefully.

 

[took.too.long]

thanks la and bord its a joke.. its supposed to be a joke.. plus it changes the whatever.... its like... Poop on my balls---shit on my dick~~~~~~lick on my cock---make it hard as rock... its 2 whole different things.......... maybe if you would have read the whole LONG LONG LONG thing you would have gotten it... it was only like 8 lines tops



SIDENOTE: Despite my feedback to your feedback, thankyou for wanted to view my other works... even though i sensed a slight taste of sarcasm.. nevertheless thanks

 

[Bordmb]

Not sarcastic at all. I will read all raps in the future. I could not read the whole rap though because my internet cut out 12 lines, I read them all now.

 

[took.too.long]

oh sorry bord lol thought it was sarcastic lol i made a new one tho check it out

im begginnning to like this

 

[Bordmb]

I read and reply to just about everything, most the time through pm.

I liked the new one a lot better.

 

[juvenilepunk]

Eh, the lyrics are pretty weird and the song doesn't flow very well.
I guess it's an improvement from your first...

 

[Mark Smith]

i lol'd, not that bad.