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Another LA Attempt

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Heidy
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I like it, and I'm not sure if it's supposed to be like this, but UR and LR corners seem to be boring with nothing in them at all.

Otherwise, I really like what you did.
 
Heidy
Sythe's 10th Anniversary
I should probably throw some sort of effect/stock over to kind of fill up the space and give it a little more depth.
 
Really love it, to be honest. Depth is good (besides the blur on the top right - what gives?), lighting is good, effects are nice and sharp (although possibly a little too sharp on the edges?), composition is decent. Needs some minor work on colouring and blending, but it turned out to be a really nice piece :)
 
Heidy
Sythe's 10th Anniversary
Really love it, to be honest. Depth is good (besides the blur on the top right - what gives?), lighting is good, effects are nice and sharp (although possibly a little too sharp on the edges?), composition is decent. Needs some minor work on colouring and blending, but it turned out to be a really nice piece :)

It was inspired by your steampunk piece, I wanted to do something like it so I started experimenting.
 
It was inspired by your steampunk piece, I wanted to do something like it so I started experimenting.

That's awesome to hear :) I really love yours on its own merits. It just has some nice strong effects and lighting and a crisp sharpness. Only improvements I can see are to make those light c4ds have a larger glow around them, possibly in a different colour, and then to fill up all that negative space on the bottom left hand corner.

Want to see another soon!
 
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