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On the first two, there's no distinctive vocal point, the only thing that catches the eye is the awful lighting.
 
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You overuse photofilters, gradients, and the like. It is all kind of basic stuff, not too much to say. Work on bringing a piece together using levels and curves so that you don't ruin the colors with photofilters.
 
The colors are unnatural and number 3 could be a nice piece if you fixed the colors and reflection in the water.
 
Joshuar said:
On the first two, there's no distinctive vocal point, the only thing that catches the eye is the awful lighting.
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thats kind of what i was going for though.
kind of abstract ?
and the lighting was added i know its kind of lame i was really just trying to do something different.

if anyone would like to teach me something you think my work is missing or something im not really sure how to put it but feel free to add my skype anthony.ggboi
criticism helps a lot guys.
 
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The composition seems off on a lot of it man. Don't get me wrong, I like them, but they need combining elements that help make the pieces a whole. Whether that be filters or curves or levels, try and make the piece more cohesive.

You'll get there! :)
 
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