abstract smudge (preview!)

[w000t]

its a crop to a LP i am currently working on

 

[Ghouben]

Nice
It looks like 3 meteorites crossing the universe and leaving flames behind and around them.

I think there should be more colors of yellow added to the yellow part though, if you know what I mean

 

[Spraynwipe]

Looks good so far, although the smudge is a little messy. Can't wait to see the end product!

 

[T R 1 B A L]

It looks incredibly oversharpened.

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2...sign_smudge_eng_ita_by_eddy_pochy-d35eulb.png

That's probably the best help I can offer, read it, it'll definitely help your smudge style.

 

[Saito]

It is good but you should add different shades of yellow.

 

[ADM_Trader]

Really good