A song I made Please check this out.

[El Three Gee Eye Tee]

Hey everyone on sythe, ive been using fl studio for while now ( like a year ) on off just making random stuff. I want know if i should actually try to like become an artist or if i have potential.

Heres the download http://www.mediafire.com/?l4zw1m83gqfe4rm

it took me a couple hours to make.
All criticism is accepted. Please suggest how i can make my music better also

Its the main video on my youtube channel: http://www.youtube.com/sourceclear

 

[Gurtaton]

Upload it on YT or nobody's watching.

 

[Nympho]

^ What he said/

No one is just going to download a random link

 

[El Three Gee Eye Tee]

I just did
the youtube link is right there

 

[Nympho]

Bass isn't deep enough.

First drop/all drops is/are shit , needs/could be WAY better.

@ 2:15 there's some =really bad reverb - that doesn't need to be there.

 

[El Three Gee Eye Tee]

Thanks for the input.

 

[burny]

Strong base for a song (base as in structure) and with some work could turn out a lot better. Agreed with Nympho; needs much lower drops, I'm guessing you don't have a decent pair of headphones?

Some of the static seems weird.
I actually quite enjoyed the previous song "Go" its not exactly perfect but its something I wouldn't bother pulling my ipod out just to change it.

 

[Joshmatee]

Ain't too bad!

 

[RHsituation]

the bass needs to be louder.. i could barely hear it.

 

[Add My Msn]

I liked some parts of this song. I would rate 5/10.

 

[team_arliss]

its alright

 

[yuppy]

Nice song.

 

[TheHacker]

I quite like it, got a kind of flux pavillion feel to it...
If your into producing you could help me out with my new dubstep channel if you want? I could feature your song's on the channel, PM me if your interested