Umm again he needs to work on his bg's, get some brushes or c4d's if you like them, and try a different font, also try something better then just an outer glow because it doesnt really look good, also when you actually make a bg with one of your sigs try to blend render in with the sig but still make sure that its your focal point, and the splatter brush doesnt really look that good and even more so because its cut off.