I like it, But you kind of messed up on the lighting. On the left side of his cheek has light on it but the light source is on the right. The wire frrame works wonders on it but it i think it would look better if you added a clipping mask to part of it.
I don't really like this one mate, I can't really see much beeing done to it. It would have been a nice simple tag if you hadn't added the c4d on the right just kills the flow of the tag.