Try working on your depth and composition. You can't really make a tag black and white to avoid color problems because black and white means you need to have good depth to give the eyes something to make the focal stand out. The text isn't very good, the placement is awful and the tag is a chaotic mess really.
I don't like the face on both sides of the picture, kind of draws your eye to both sides and there isn't a main focus then. Besides that I like the picture.