First in a while

[w000t]

dun really like it IMO

 

[Tottzilla]

Well, its better than what i can do, but ill agree, i dont like it much either.

 

[Avenuve]

Well, its better than what i can do, but ill agree, i dont like it much either.

This. Too much light in it. =/

 

[Genie83]

It seems too... bulky. Maybe if you darkened it, added a nice bored and resized it so it is smaller, then it would look better. You have the potential to do well though.

 

[F4M0US]

Too much light? The girls seems stretched out :/

 

[Screamin Silence]

agreed darken and shade a bit more.

But its a good start.