Signature

[JonathanG]

another attempt at making a signature.

 

[Kiabin]

Usually using two renders doesn't work. It's too clattered, and distracting. Not to mention, it's too transparent. You have no effects. Work more, sir .

 

[Spraynwipe]

Agreed with Kiabin, also size down your focal some more.

 

[So Industrial]

i suggest reading more tutorials =)

10/10 for effort keep goin