Abyss

[warehouse]

Starting to get back into GFX design, so I decided to start off by trying to use C4D with a simple stock. I love how it turned out, and it's been a while since I've made something so I'm surprised I still have the memory/ability that I once did.

Any criticism is welcome, like I said it's my first piece in a while aside from the SOTW entry.

EDIT: Added a second with just a single sharpen, tell me what you like better.

 

[shane+]

I like it, its simplistic. I think I have that stock on my computer, you didnt do much, but it looks good.

 

[warehouse]

The only stock was the jellyfish. The rest of it is C4D and just a solid background.

EDIT: Here's the stock for comparison, http://wimg.co.uk/CAw.jpg.

 

[shane+]

yeah I have that stock, more done than I first thought.

 

You should have burned the edges around the jellyfish. If I'm correct, they're meant to be the focal right?

 

[skybluesam1]

nice i have that stock i think

 

[warehouse]

More so the top right, the name and the idea was that they're coming up from the abyss of the sea so the light is where your eye should wander. I feel as though the jellies pull your eye toward it though, but the main focus is not them.

 

[MohtasaUnique]

Looks nice, I don't know if you should have named it "abyss" though (extremely unimportant observation, ignore this if you honestly don't care), I see abyss as dark, so I was expecting a darker sig.

Anyway, what verts says; you should find a way to make the focal pop more.

Thanks for the share:] KIU

Also; the sharpened one looks better, but it really isn't very noticeable