Typography

[MohtasaUnique]

What do you think? It's chaotic, but I like it:]

http://i48.tinypic.com/2d6k6t3.jpg

V2

http://i45.tinypic.com/11tan8p.png

 

[Lukef555]

Its very chaotic and theres not alot of blending (Lots of different colors) But other then that its looking nice.

 

[desu]

you should have feathered the big pink and blue lines coming out the ends of the letters. they look pixelated.

 

[T R 1 B A L]

you should have feathered the big pink and blue lines coming out the ends of the letters. they look pixelated.

Nai that's cuz it's sharpened after that.

FOOL!

and background's a stock bokeh think - not cool

colours don't blend - not cool

composition - not cool

overall - pretty cool

 

[MohtasaUnique]

Thanks tribal:] Really, it was just a experimentation of a bunch of stuff I've seen around the internet, I'm glad it at least earned a pretty cool overall;D

Oh, by the way, I made the bokeh

 

From what I can see, it looks very poorly planned and composed. The skills are definitely there and with a lot more careful planning regarding composition and colour schemes, you can definitely create a powerful piece. It's probably a good idea for you to go right back to basics and focus on things like colour theory and perhaps picking your colours from a colour sphere.

 

[Haunted]

I'm a little stuck right here, potential could of been great.
I love those styles. but the colors don't go well and it hurts my eyes to look at it.
Sadly, what could of been a great piece turned out a little wrong.
It looks to sharpened and over done.
Keep working on this I'm sure you will find the right composure of colors!

(Nice Gina Carano btw haha)