ditch the text imo,
the quality is quite nice and the double focal works alright
but yeah not really any lighting, dodge and burn some parts. or add a light source.
It isn't sharp enough. The right side screams the stock wasn't big enough, and you didn't have an idea. It's very distracting. The text is very bland. The somewhat border was unnecessary. Use more splatter brushes, clipping masks, and useful effects.