First signature.

[Hungryjakz]

Decided to get Photoshop and give it a go- basically followed a tutorial but I changed a bit of stuff like adding the text in the background etc....

What do you guys think? Any feedback would be great, thanks

 

[Civilian.]

Looks alright dude.

 

[Hungryjakz]

Thanks! what do you think I should do to improve on it?

 

[Draucia]

First sig...?
Did you take a stock (that wizard thing in the background) and add text to it (too much, btw)?
If you didn't that's amazing.

 

[Decisive]

Is your focal point the text put in the background? It's the first thing that caught my eye when I first glanced at the signature. After looking at the signature for some time I spent more time trying to figure out what the text means than looking at what the renders are doing. You can try checking out this signature tutorial I made a couple years ago here. It's nothing great but it might help you get a little better understanding about signature making.

 

[Hungryjakz]

yeah I got the render from planetrenders.net and added the text in the background myself... it is just lorem ipsum there, was not meant to be a focal point but now that you mention it, it does stand out a bit too much. I had another version without the text but then the background looked a little boring I thought.

 

[boofdemon]

Yeah itz pre good exept for the fact that Aions gay

 

[Fed]

I think the text looks a bit messy in this, for a first sig, it's still a great effort mate.

 

[Lukef555]

Theres NO all that was done by you on a first sig, i have no doubt 90% of it was the orifinal stock. Also, noone in hell wants to read that much text.

 

[Tucking Fypo]

Not bad, but what does all the writing mean?