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[Big In Japan]

well this is the latest thing ive been working on i dont usually make sigs with real life people in it i tend to stick to animated renders/stocks but i think this turned out quite nice

comment rate criticise , thanks

 

[Alteranz]

Floating Heads are a no-no - The figure should be traveling out of the page, and the shoulders/neck visible. This can easily be rectified by rubbing away some of the stock/c4d/fractal beneath her chin (I'm unsure what it is...)
The light source is also TOO definite - you've made it appear like a solid ray. Instead you should only hint it at the top edge, a soft brushing of a lighter color (avoid pure white) should do the trick.
Remove the border... and avoid using one in the future - 99% of signatures are more effective without one.

 

[Big In Japan]

Floating Heads are a no-no - The figure should be traveling out of the page, and the shoulders/neck visible. This can easily be rectified by rubbing away some of the stock/c4d/fractal beneath her chin (I'm unsure what it is...)
The light source is also TOO definite - you've made it appear like a solid ray. Instead you should only hint it at the top edge, a soft brushing of a lighter color (avoid pure white) should do the trick.
Remove the border... and avoid using one in the future - 99% of signatures are more effective without one.

mmhm thanks for the advice .. ive heard of no floating heads before but when i startedit wasent a floating headi turned it into that by accident lol , round her neck she is wearing a feathery scarf thing so its going to be hard to get her neck to stand out lol , also on her head and its just brushes / clipping mask round that area.

 

[Alteranz]

mmhm thanks for the advice .. ive heard of no floating heads before but when i startedit wasent a floating headi turned it into that by accident lol , round her neck she is wearing a feathery scarf thing so its going to be hard to get her neck to stand out lol , also on her head and its just brushes / clipping mask round that area.

Anything that leads the image of her out of the picture... I'm sure making the scarf visible will be fine.

 

[Kadaj]

I think you need to sharpen some of the left side.